what i’m writing…
Monday July 30th 2007, 16:57
Filed under: fiction

They ain’t even his, she thought. If they was his at least they’d be family. If they was his, at least they’d have good blood. But no.

They belonged to another man – common, bound to be – and some town girl. With skinny hips and a skinny waist.

“Lay with ‘em but don’t bring ‘em home. And whatever you do don’t marry ‘em!”

Ain’t she always told all her boys that. Ain’t she always done right by them, with no man and only the good book to guide her.


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Dang girl, you’re good! You need to stop dabbling and get rich off your words :)

Comment by kat 07.30.07 @ 21:11

Wonderfully layered.

Comment by Veronica 07.30.07 @ 22:19

Definitely something of merit and a very good beginning. I’d want to read more of this.

Comment by mojo shivers 07.31.07 @ 8:33

so…when is the book coming out??? HUH? HUH?

Comment by steph 07.31.07 @ 13:10

Wow. This is really good.

Comment by Matt 08.01.07 @ 13:53

hmm. nice flavor, but as the ‘common’ one with slim hips, I admit, I bristled.

Comment by tgov 08.02.07 @ 5:30

i bristled for you. but i think that’s the point. i dont think were suppose to like this lady. she sounds dispicable

Comment by amry 08.17.07 @ 16:45



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