what could have been…
Friday October 27th 2006, 16:34
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Pt 3: I hoped Maroula wouldn’t turn out the same way, but worried that she would.

The paramedics arrived, and began checking her vitals and asking about allergies… “Chocolate and nuts. I know. Isn’t it terrible!”

Through the window I watched two officers put a bearded man into the backseat of a cruiser.

Bobby Loop did follow his wife. He sat crouched in a bush at the edge of the parking lot, just beyond the lights of the Quickie Mart. Waiting. The boys in blue picked him up beating hard through an empty field behind the convenience store. He still had his gun, and that look of cowardice most men like him wear when confronted by anyone who’s not a woman.

One of the officers told Maroula “It’s all ok, you don’t have to worry anymore” and looked at Jean like she was crazy when she pushed him out of the way and grabbed the girl by her shoulders.

“No! It ain’t OK. When he comes back and tells you he’s sorry and he loves you, and he will…they always do… don’t listen. Don’t listen cause when you do, he’ll kill you. He’ll kill you and he’ll put you in that pond just like he said he would. He’ll do it and you and me both know he’ll do it…You go back to your family. You hear me?”

Maroula nodded that she did. She promised she’d go home to her mother and the officer promised he’d do what he could to help her.

It was after 2am when I left the Quickie Mart. When I said goodbye to Jean and checked the back seat of my car for hidden hillbillies. A mile down the road I drove past the pond and it’s blackness.

I couldn’t help but think of what almost was. What could have been.

And what still, might be.

This is a true story. Only the names have been changed. Maroula was taken to a battered women’s shelter. Bobby Loop was taken to the local. I’ll get an email when he gets out.

Don’t be a victim. If you, or anyone you know, suffer from this type of pervasive abuse, call The National Domestic Violence Hotline: 1-800-799-SAFE (7233) .


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Oh wow. This is so sad and yet so true it’s scary. Amazingly told story. Thank you for sharing.

Comment by themarina 10.27.06 @ 18:03

Oh … what can I say? My heart is pounding and I am just praying that Maroula is wise enough to heed the advice of Jean.
Thank you for sharing and providing the hotline information.

Comment by Frannie Farmer 10.27.06 @ 18:44

This is unbelieveable. Thanks for telling this story and for telling it so well. You have an amazing gift for narrative. :)

Comment by anne 10.27.06 @ 18:50

I have never been a victim, but I hope that anyone who is will heed your advice.

Comment by kenju 10.27.06 @ 21:30

I’m glad it’s ok, at least for now.

Now, take care of YOU, ok???

Comment by LisaBinDaCity 10.28.06 @ 14:37

Wonderfully told and all too true. But there are more types of abuse than physical. I have several friends who are verbally and mentally battered every day but when confronted about it they always reply “But he doesn’t hit me!”

Comment by Junebugg 10.29.06 @ 3:43

Junebugg…I’ll be one of the first people to tell you that emotional abuse, and its effects, can often be just as scarring as physical abuse.

Comment by Buffy 10.29.06 @ 4:50

Makes my blood boil. Loved the line about the look of cowardice when being threatened by someone other than a woman. Bullies. Probably work in the slaughter houses of beef industry, huh? This is excellant. Wish it was in every woman’s magazine. Needs to be read by every woman. You are gifted writer with a compassionate heart and tremendous sense of justice.

Comment by hattigrace 10.29.06 @ 14:33

Horrifying. And all too common. I hope she stays away from him but statistics say she’ll be back with him as soon as he’s out of jail. Men like that will never, ever stop beating women, so why are they ever let out of jail? There is no “cure” for them.

Comment by Katherine 10.29.06 @ 16:16

good job buff!

Comment by steph 10.30.06 @ 13:56

I hope she went home to her family. Very well told.

Comment by Andrea 10.30.06 @ 21:38

This is just so scary. It could happen to anyone. I just hope she went home to her family. They should never let that good for nothing out of jail.

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